Kia ora bloggers,
4 September 2018 Mrs Butler came to our class and thought us how to do poetry and here's one poetry.
Did you ever
Ride a plane?
Legs shaking
Eyes closing
Heart pounding
Try it!
Did you ever
On a long water slide?
People screaming
Body shaking
Water splashing
I LOVE IT!
Mrs Butler challenged us to use precise nouns and verbs in each stanza.
That's the poem I wrote.
That's all bye!
Water splashing
I LOVE IT!
Mrs Butler challenged us to use precise nouns and verbs in each stanza.
That's the poem I wrote.
That's all bye!
Dear Aryan,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your did you ever poem because I can actually imagine myself doing that and because I have already been on a plane two times. I really liked how Mrs Butler challenged you to write a did you ever poem and you did a great poem even though you don't need to be an artist.
Yours sincerely:Nevaeh
Thank you!
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