This is my first draft writing on our class assembly that we had on Friday 17th March. Our learning intention was to use adjectives and verbs in our writing. Please take a read of my writing and let me know how I can improve my writing.
Our class had a assembly there was people hiding those people are Taylor, Mandita ,Riha and I was hiding in the resource room. Fehi, Lorenzo, Dornia, Chrislyn and Raymond were outside greeting the students that were coming to our assembly.
After that Joseph, Talal, Levi, Lillas, Cassandra, Simon, Zion, and tuli said the greetings. When everyone was settled Shreya and Ina started to talk.
SUDDENLY!!! There was a music just opened and the people that was hiding. Started to come out.
Then Mrs campbell came and gave out the certificates.
I was saying a poem i felt nervous and I had tummy bugs. After that mrs musa came and gave the mathletics award Hansen class won the trophy.
After we sang Ateroa song I was singing so loud.
Then the assembly was finished we put on a song it was called the world's greatest. When the song was going the classes went back to their class.
